Wow. Thank you for the constructive criticism. :) I haven't written much fanfiction at all. And those that I write are Granada (Brett-Burke) because I love that show and Burke's Watson. So saying when I write I image them but apparently not really putting enough characterization from the show into it so other people saw what I did when I wrote it. Also when I haven't been watching the show or writing them for a while I tend to get out of touch. I haven't seen any of the '09 verse movies or read anything from it so I don't know about that. But yeah, after I wrote this and read it after and saw a lot of the flaws but decided that this was a 24 hr. challenge and it wouldn't be in the spirit to change anything. I just told myself to better learn who they are for next time.